Friday, April 24, 2009

Yes, Its you !!

I was standing alone, waiting for you!
You are gone forever, I never knew!
I was about to lose myself in this world’s endless queue!
I felt someone holding my hand, turned back and saw it's you!

Though my feelings are not many, just a few!
And I know you are unaware, even with a clue!
I want to share all my memories, old and new!
Because they are purely incomplete, without you!

I woke up yesterday, and touched the morning dew!
My fingers on the window pane, it’s your name what I drew!
Endless attempt of calling you, ended up at “contacts” view!
Expected at every knock on the door, but it’s never you!

If crosswords of life completes, without any whew!
I will turn scarlet red, erasing all the blue!
Beautiful shadows of past, though welcomed lieu!
Because I felt someone holding my hand, turned back and saw its you!

6 comments:

Unknown said...

Oh,what a poem.Pl don't stop writing.

sur said...

Beautifully written..

Unknown said...

awesome rhyming.... keep it up..

Restive Mind said...

Beautiful!!
Can fell quite a few things from it myself !

mahendra said...

I woke up yesterday, and touched the morning dew!
My fingers on the window pane, it’s your name what I drew!
Endless attempt of calling you, ended up at “contacts” view!
Expected at every knock on the door, but it’s never you!

awsomeee dear... iin lines men jo morning dew k smooth ahsas nd pane pe likhnaa
really real....

keep it up dear... tumre case study men kitni baar mujhe editing krni hogi!!!!!!
Ab poetess Piyaaaaaaaaaaaaa...
i feel i have to expand my database.....
bahut hi badhiyaaaa...

Shubhojit said...

And looks like he "went and saved the best for last" !!!

The flow is gr8. You should write more.